COMPARE AND CONTRAST PARAGRAPH

Today, I went two different places in secondlife. These are Spacestation Sci-fi Mall and Edunation. There were a lot of differences between them. But they had only one similarity I think. It was that both of them have spectacular buildings. These buildings were so beautiful that I also wanted to go those in my real life, not only secondlife. However there were lots of differences. For example, either of them was an island which makes this places wonderful while another one was a place which was indoor. At Edunation, there were so many trees that accidentally I collided them again and again while flying. But at another place, there weren't any trees. Moreover Spacestation Sci-Fi Mall had shops about scientific materials. Differently, Edunation was a place where there were a lot of houses where people could live. Houses there were very colourful while shops in Sci-fi Mall were colourless. In addition, in sci-fi mall there were an aquarium as distinct from Edunation. That aquarium had a lot of fish and a tortoise. I think sci-fi mall was beautiful but artificial. So if I had to choose one of them, I could want to see Edunation. Because atmosphere there was warm.